I'm thinking that this looks pretty good, about the proportions thing I would say that the legs might be a bit too tall, I would lower the waist and shorten the lower legs. Everything else looks good about the body. ^^ The head might just be a bit too pushed together? I can't really say. I used to have tons of problems with proportions an such before, now I use a 3D Poser program to get the angles and proportions right, I really recommend it (+ it's free ^^). It's called DAZ Studio. Having a model to reference really helps a lot. Keep up the good work!
Thanks so much for taking the time to Critique this! It means a lot to me! hahaha honestly I think you were too generous on the stars. hahaha Thanks so much!
I will be thinking about that when I ink it and play around with the proportions. I think you are right about the legs and hips. I'll play with it. Maybe bringing the hips down will make the torso longer and the legs a little shorter. I'm not sure what you mean about the head but I'll play with that too. Thanks again!